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Chapter 34: Why make me suddenly so indecisive!

Li Tiaodeng looked at Lin Yi's calm face, her determined gaze turning soft and tender.

Lin Yi did not intend to continue scolding Li Tiaodeng; he simply used his current seventh-realm Dao of the Sword to point out the flaws in her recent sword momentum.

"……Do you understand?" Lin Yi looked at the young girl standing prettily not far away, dressed in a snow-white skirt, her long sword pointing diagonally.

Blown by the slightly cold wind, she appeared even more ethereal and graceful.

"I understand." Although Li Tiaodeng hadn't heard a single word, that didn't stop her from nodding.

With a serious expression on her face, she added, "It's just… Master, I feel there are still some places where I cannot achieve perfect fluidity."

"What places?" Lin Yi raised an eyebrow slightly, looking curiously at the girl who was lying with a straight face; he was actually quite interested to see what Li Tiaodeng was up to.

She had been looking absent-minded since just a moment ago.

Such a disobedient Disciple deserves to be punished!

Facing Lin Yi's gaze, Li Tiaodeng casually mentioned a few areas that she did indeed feel were not quite right.

"Perform it for me once." Lin Yi did not arrogantly point out the problems directly; mainly because he was only at the seventh realm now and had not yet reached the Transcendent level.

For a Sword Cultivator, everyone's sword is different.

Ye Linyuan practices the Ruthless Sword, Sword Saint Bai Zhe practices the Bitter Sword, and Lin Yi practices the Sentimental Sword.

Pei Yuhan's sword is cold and clear, Lu Jiajing's sword is elegant, Yu Xiaotang's sword is light and nimble, while Li Tiaodeng's sword…

Lin Yi watched as Li Tiaodeng began to brandish her long sword again in the chill.

Every chop and slash carried a hint of sharpness.

Perhaps because she had fled from famine, her sword carried Killing Intent.

Li Tiaodeng was already in the third realm of the Dao of the Sword, but she had been slow to find the entrance to the fourth realm.

She kept wondering what exactly she was drawing her sword for…

She possessed a Natural Sword Body and would not be delayed at this realm for too long, but Li Tiaodeng discovered that her heart was resisting entering the fourth realm.

She always felt that something was missing.

Those very important things…

Although she had some distracting thoughts in her mind, Li Tiaodeng still performed the sword moves completely from beginning to end.

Lin Yi's fingers remained resting on the stone table as he watched Li Tiaodeng's figure as she sheathed her sword, remaining silent.

Li Tiaodeng looked at Lin Yi nervously.

It was true that she had wicked thoughts in her heart, but it was also true that she hoped Lin Yi would be satisfied; after all, she had been practicing the sword for so long.

One of the reasons she practiced the sword was to see Lin Yi's admiring gaze and hear his words of praise.

Lin Yi pondered for a moment, then stood up and signaled for Li Tiaodeng to strike a sword pose.

Li Tiaodeng followed Lin Yi's instruction and maintained her thrusting posture.

Lin Yi walked to Li Tiaodeng's side and placed his fingertips on the edge of her sword.

"Follow my force."

Lin Yi instructed her calmly, then used his spiritual power to guide Li Tiaodeng's body, beginning to teach her the Dao of the Sword for the first time.

This was truly the first time Lin Yi had taught Li Tiaodeng sword techniques.

In the past, either Yu Xiaotang had taught her, or he had simply tossed a sword manual at her.

It was mainly because Lin Yi considered that Li Tiaodeng had a Natural Sword Body and could achieve the Dao without anyone else's teaching.

But he had forgotten one thing: exploring on one's own is much slower compared to having a Master lead the way.

Lin Yi criticized himself slightly for being such a hands-off Master.

Thinking of this, Lin Yi focused his attention and began to teach Li Tiaodeng some basic tips, such as how to more smoothly connect thrusts and chops, chops and parries…

While Li Tiaodeng could certainly have figured these things out on her own, Lin Yi's guidance made these things that would have taken time to learn appear directly and simply before the young girl.

Because of the System's enlightenment, Lin Yi had completely mastered all knowledge and techniques below the seventh realm of the Dao of the Sword.

This was the benefit of the System; Lin Yi didn't need to practice, yet he could Master the methods of using various swords like heavy swords and soft swords, whereas he had only practiced with the Three-Foot Sword before.

Li Tiaodeng silently felt Lin Yi's warmth.

Her Master's gentle instruction made her feel somewhat dazed.

Her body was thirstily absorbing the techniques Lin Yi described, while her own mind went blank.

"Master… this is a bit awkward. How about… you just place your hand on the sword hilt and guide your Disciple in practicing the sword…"

Li Tiaodeng didn't know when she had said those words, but she could already feel her face flushing red.

The so-called guiding her in sword practice was nothing more than holding her, then placing his hands over hers, and swinging the long sword together.

Lin Yi glanced at Li Tiaodeng and, seeing the girl's pure gaze, he pondered for a moment.

It was just that… why did it feel like there was a somewhat dazed look in Li Tiaodeng's eyes?

But it didn't matter.

Anyway, as long as he taught her body, it would be fine.

As for her consciousness… forget it, letting her body act as a substitute fighter wasn't bad either.

At this moment, Lin Yi's mind was entirely focused on making up for his dereliction of duty as a Master.

The thought of wanting to see what she was doing had already been suppressed, mainly because he also felt quite awkward when guiding Li Tiaodeng's body.

Li Tiaodeng thus found herself falling into Lin Yi's embrace.

She stared blankly ahead, the warm body behind her scorching her back, and she bit her lip slightly with her pearl-white teeth.

She lowered her gaze slightly, her fingertips feeling the temperature of Lin Yi's fingertips, and her originally somewhat cold fingertips began to warm up.

Step, sheath the sword.

Li Tiaodeng looked up and actively pressed against Lin Yi's chest.

Lin Yi frowned slightly.

Turn, sweep the sword.

Li Tiaodeng turned her head slightly, her soft breath hitting Lin Yi's neck, and she gently inhaled the pleasant scent on Lin Yi's body.

Lin Yi sighed.

Chop, slash, point, thrust…

Li Tiaodeng moved in proactively, trembling as she pressed her lips against the corner of Lin Yi's mouth.

Lin Yi turned his head slightly, letting Li Tiaodeng kiss his cheek instead.

The young girl's somewhat gentle voice came through.

"Master, it's all your fault for making me unable to help myself, for having to be so tempting…"

She put down the sword in her hand, and with a soft sound, the long sword hit the ground, while her slender fingers turned to grasp Lin Yi's hand.

"It's all your fault…"

"What… are you two doing?"

Author's Note on Subscription: This is the author's second book on the platform.

Like the last one, I won't abandon it.

The author is a breath of fresh air in the pigeon nest (laugh). Read with confidence.

If there are any characters you want, just say so in the book review section; I will check it from time to time.

This book has an outline, and the content for the first few volumes has already been planned.

You don't need to care too much about the original work; just treat it as an original story.

I will try my best to write out the characteristics of the heroines.

Many things inside are actually things I added to the original work after creating my own.

The timeline is very messy because the heroines span a long timeline; it's impossible for the protagonist to start writing from thirty thousand years ago.

The most important point: no poison, no NTR, the male lead is not indecisive, and the harem is all chaste and perfect.

I hope you brothers will support me!!

Thank you.

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Regarding the rewards, I might be asking for too much, but the author is truly powerless.

Everyone in the group knows that I have to write at least 15,000 words a day, and I really can't manage any more updates.

Alright, I'm embarrassed to ask for data.

Sorry to trouble everyone.

Thank you.

Chapter 65: Li Tiaodeng: I am invincible (Seeking first subscription)

A calm voice rang out in the courtyard, yet it was like a thunderclap on a clear day, causing Li Tiaodeng to subconsciously let go of Lin Yi's hand.

Li Tiaodeng subconsciously looked in the direction the voice came from!

Grandmaster!

Li Tiaodeng's rosy complexion turned slightly pale, as if she had seen something truly terrifying, but immediately after, she realized!

Anyway, Pei Yuhan was involved with her own Disciple, so what was wrong with her, a Disciple, being involved with her Master?!!

Li Tiaodeng! You are so weak!

Li Tiaodeng cursed herself in her heart, and her expression immediately became natural.

The previous trembling also quickly dissipated, but there was still some shyness left in the girl's heart; being seen by others was always somewhat embarrassing.

Lin Yi slightly released his hand from Li Tiaodeng's slender waist.

His expression unchanged, he smiled at Pei Yuhan standing in the corridor.

"Master, I am teaching Tiaodeng to practice the sword."

Pei Yuhan's expression was cold and clear.

It wasn't as if she hadn't seen it.

What sword practice… sword practice was fake, flirting was real, right?

She closed her eyes slightly.

Master… I am sorry, the Sword Sect you passed down is likely to be ruined in the hands of this pair of unworthy Master and Disciple.

"Then let it be that you are teaching her to practice the sword." Pei Yuhan said calmly.

She walked over slowly, not stopping as she passed by Lin Yi and Li Tiaodeng, and sat down in the spot where Lin Yi had sat before.

Lin Yi curled his lip.

He was really teaching Li Tiaodeng to practice the sword; it was entirely Li Tiaodeng who wanted to commit an act of disrespect against her Master, he was innocent!

"Continue with your sword practice."

Pei Yuhan had her back to Lin Yi and Li Tiaodeng.

She surveyed the desolate scenery of the pond full of withered lotus leaves in front of her, and when she mentioned the words 'sword practice', she specifically emphasized them.

Li Tiaodeng turned her head slightly to look at her Master's expression.

Naturally, she was not afraid.

Since she had already done it and her feelings had been made clear, she was now invincible!

"Master…"

Lin Yi glanced at Li Tiaodeng, then reached out and unhesitatingly knocked her on the head!

Li Tiaodeng cried out in pain.

She subconsciously squatted down, covering her head with her hands.

Her pretty little face tilted up slightly, and she looked at Lin Yi with a wronged expression, her cold eyes becoming moist.

"Master, why did you knock me… it hurts…"

Lin Yi looked at her with a half-smile.

"Pick up the sword and stop thinking about all those random things."

Li Tiaodeng naturally understood why Lin Yi had knocked her.

Her behavior was partly to gain Lin Yi's sympathy, and partly because she wanted to act coquettishly towards Lin Yi.

Li Tiaodeng said "oh" and obediently picked up the long sword she had just dropped on the ground.

She stood up and stood in front of Lin Yi.

Compared to Lin Yi, she was a little shorter, reaching about the level of Lin Yi's eyebrows, so if she wanted to kiss Lin Yi, she needed to stand on her tiptoes slightly.

Li Tiaodeng estimated the difference between herself and her Master, her eyes flickering.

Next time… she would definitely not give her Master a chance to dodge!

Eh?

Li Tiaodeng blinked.

She stared blankly as Lin Yi pulled her over and embraced her again, just like before, hugging her waist from behind while his other hand placed itself over her fingertips holding the sword.

Li Tiaodeng had thought her Master wouldn't practice the sword this way again… after all, she had just committed such an act of disrespect against her Master.

"Don't overthink it, don't get distracted. If you still can't learn it, watch out for your butt."

Lin Yi's warm breath hit Li Tiaodeng's jade-like neck, making her fair little face flush slightly red.

Li Tiaodeng's eyes darted around, and she pursed her lips.

She wanted to test if she just slacked off, would her Master really spank her butt? How much force would he use, where would he hit, and how many times…

But in the end, Li Tiaodeng didn't do that.

She pulled herself together, the unique scent of her beloved Master lingering at the tip of her nose, and began to familiarize herself with the sword formula once again, following Lin Yi's calm explanation and the slight tugging sensation.

Although Pei Yuhan was looking elsewhere, her Divine Sense was always on Lin Yi and Li Tiaodeng.

Seeing that they were really practicing the sword this time, she shook her head gently.

She had seen the scene where Li Tiaodeng leaned in just now clearly, from beginning to end!

If she hadn't spoken up suddenly, Li Tiaodeng might have really kissed him.

No matter what Pei Yuhan thought, Lin Yi and Li Tiaodeng were truly immersed in the Dao of the Sword.

In Li Tiaodeng's eyes, there was only the long sword in her palm.

She subconsciously flicked it, then chopped, and a wave of sword energy flew into the air, flying straight for more than ten meters before dissipating.

Li Tiaodeng closed her eyes slightly, then slowly opened them.

"That's enough. I have taught you everything I should. From now on, you will have to rely on your own enlightenment."

Lin Yi looked at that streak of sword energy, a smile appearing on the corner of his mouth.

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